Part I
“Hi my name is—“
Ja – boom!
“Whoa! Sorry I’m in the middle of the revolutionary war. As I wa—”
Boom!
“Okay. Jack, my name is Jack. Well we are in the revolutionary war beca—”
Boom!
"Okay that is it. Go to the tent while I go get my sister. Go!”
Jack and a soldier walked across the bloody battlefield. A couple more minutes later …
“Okay, now that we are in a tent, let me introduce you to Annie.”
“Hi!” said Annie.
Jack sat down on a bunk, the soldier stood by the door.
“Okay,” said Jack. “Now that I’ve introduced you to Annie let me tell you why we’re here. It’s because we are trying to save a king. I know it sounds stupid but it is true.”
“Yeah!” Annie echoed, “It’s true!”
The soldier laughed.
Annie scowled. “You think this is funny? Oh my god you make me so mad!”
Annie ran into the battlefield.
“Great!” says Jack, “Now I have to go and get her! Thanks a lot!”
Part II
Annie!”
Boom!
“Annie!”
Boom!
“Annie!” Screamed Jack out across the bloody battlefield. Jack gasped when he saw Annie injured under a tree. What happened?
“I got shot,” mumbled Annie.
“Is there a medic?” screamed Jack.
“I’m—”
Boom!
“Here!” said the medic.
“Get her to a tent!” screamed Jack.
The medic cradles Annie in his arms and makes his way to the tent.
“You’re going to be fine,” sobbed Jack.
“She will be patched up tomorrow,” said the medic.
“See, Jack, I will be fine. Now go,” murmured Annie.
“No! I’m not leaving this tent until your fine!” Sniffed Jack.
Will Annie survive or die?
Annie!”
Boom!
“Annie!”
Boom!
“Annie!” Screamed Jack out across the bloody battlefield. Jack gasped when he saw Annie injured under a tree. What happened?
“I got shot,” mumbled Annie.
“Is there a medic?” screamed Jack.
“I’m—”
Boom!
“Here!” said the medic.
“Get her to a tent!” screamed Jack.
The medic cradles Annie in his arms and makes his way to the tent.
“You’re going to be fine,” sobbed Jack.
“She will be patched up tomorrow,” said the medic.
“See, Jack, I will be fine. Now go,” murmured Annie.
“No! I’m not leaving this tent until your fine!” Sniffed Jack.
Will Annie survive or die?
To be Continued ...
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